biooooooooo 4 Cloverclaw

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Name:Cloverclaw

Age:23 moons

Gender:Tom

Position: warrior

Clan:Thunderclan

Appearance(3):He has green eyes. He has a grey pelt. He has a scar on his face.

Personality(4)He is nice. He is foolish but brave. He is fast. He is naive.

History(6): unknown.he has stayed in ThunderClan all his life.

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mm, well, I'd like you to work on your sentences, you'll have to blend them together better. For example. "Cloverclaw is a nice tom. He has lots of speed and is a bit naive." somethings on that order.

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ill remember that